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Post by /////// on Apr 20, 2014 9:45:29 GMT -6
https%3A//soundcloud.com/radioactiveblanket/waker-wip
A little something I started this morning, I really like working on stuff like this. What do you guys think of it?
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Post by Endlyng on Apr 20, 2014 12:32:08 GMT -6
I like it! Have you considered putting some kind of change around the 0:36 mark? |
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Post by /////// on Apr 20, 2014 18:53:16 GMT -6
Yep! Now that I listen to it again, its sounds a bit plain.
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Post by Lycereon on Apr 20, 2014 19:50:09 GMT -6
I think this is good. A change at :36 would make it better. Other than that is pretty good  |
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Post by /////// on Apr 21, 2014 6:35:43 GMT -6
https%3A//soundcloud.com/radioactiveblanket/waker-wip-2
I've uploaded another wip, I think this sounds a bit better!
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Post by Kurokibo on Apr 21, 2014 7:21:45 GMT -6
The timing went off at 01:55. Also the part after that has this weird clicky noise thing. It sounds like it's intended but it doesn't sound very good with it.
I'm not really a fan of the weird kicks rhythm (like around 0:46) because of how the frequencies may clash but other than that this is pretty good. It does sound pretty dry but I'll leave it up to you for that.
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Post by /////// on Apr 21, 2014 7:33:04 GMT -6
I see what you mean at 1:55, I gotta fix that. I myself don't see a problem with the clicks or the kick, but I believe you! I'm gonna play around with it a bit more and see what I can do.
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Post by Lycereon on Apr 21, 2014 15:21:28 GMT -6
I actually love the kick in this song, but that's just my opinion, others may think differently. Also like Kuro said, at 1:55 it sounds a bit mixed up. Other than the mix up I think it sounds pretty good Also I have to say at the beginning of the song, the noises in the background are so good there, I love it ~
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